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In the Shower

Naked in the shower, Water flowing over me As hot as I can bear; Scalding my skin, Masking my tears, Drowning my cries, Hardening my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 3:33:00 AM
your poem is powerful yet short. i wrote a longer poem on the same subject. So difficult, right?
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Date: 11/1/2016 7:15:00 AM
Such a sad and lonely feeling piece but well written too. It says a lot in just a few words. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/1/2016 6:37:00 AM
Sad and beautiful
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