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In The Rain

Written June 6, 2013

The preacher read the gospel
And we sank into our tears
Tearing down the curtain
We've been behind for all these years

A baby leaves its mother
An angel drops its wings
Leave me bound against the wall
Dangling by a string

Sitting by the window
Hoping she'll remember me
Sitting by the window
Contemplating memories

Resolve your inhibitions
And you'll find me in the garden
Where the flowers drink champagne
And God is in the rain

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  1. Date: 6/19/2013 3:24:00 AM
    Poignant expressions here- I must say a very well thought out verse. Thank you for the encouragement on my poem, Goodbye, My Child Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
    This is gracefully written,indeed a fine write Brandon.The last stanza is awesome!

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    Date: 6/7/2013 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. And yeah that's my favorite part too