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In the Park

I was a child of merry swings Swings that rolled to touch the light, blue Blue the park winging despite time, Time for my boy to feel my child. For nette onclaud--- Four Lines Only Jajosh Ongado---June 8, 2015 Visual 5

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Date: 6/14/2015 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the winning piece Jajosh..'
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:45:00 PM
Jajosh, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2015 6:05:00 PM
Well done, Jajosh! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2015 3:13:00 PM
i chose this visual too beautifully penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:12:00 PM
Allowing your boy to experience parts of your own childhood is fantastic. Well scribed, J!
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