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IN THE GARDEN OF EDEN

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IN THE GARDEN OF EDEN

Butterfly I saw
In the Garden of Eden
Celebrates its beauty
Colorful flowers to see
God’s gift for you and for me

The season of smile
Trees wave its leaves for a while
To show happiness
Air filled with so much freshness
Birds singing sweet lullaby



Motif: Nature
For Giorgio's "Impress Me V" contest
4th Place Winner
Maria Paz Samelo

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  1. Date: 3/20/2014 9:57:00 AM
    an amazing paradise... EDEN... well penned ,Paz.. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ^__^

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 5:20:00 AM
    Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, maria

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 4:28:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Maria ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 1:07:00 AM
    Maria, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 11:02:00 PM
    Maria, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:13:00 AM
    Maria, an awesome win~Yours truly *SKAT

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Maria, such peaceful thoughs--I can't wait for the flowers!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM
    Maria, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:57:00 AM
    What a lovely write vividly describing the fantastic view of an Eden Garden. Is this for the contest? Well, wish you all the best and good luck always!!! love/hugs:)) Leonora

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/9/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes, this is for the contest..just try learn how to write in tanka form..hehehehe thanks my friend for all your support..hugs always!
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:21:00 AM
    This is sweet....well done. BG

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Barbara :)have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:28:00 PM
    Hey, this is very nice. Glad I caught it here tonight.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/7/2012 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Andrea...Good day!! (^_^)