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In the End Theres Always Something Pointless Holding Us Back............

in the end theres always something pointless holding us back from discovering what we could become or what we will become or who we can become or when we will become it or even if it becomes us or maybe just maybe everyone becomes someone else but trapped in a different reality one which we cannot see them but they can see us like a two way mirror thats trapped in infinity but which in another time and place could become something that encompasses all that we say and do and all that every other soul on the planets say and do but it will not restrict our actions because freedoms are more important than being free but i digress somewhat because in the end theres always something pointless holding us back..............

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Date: 4/30/2010 9:13:00 PM
I get your point. :-) Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:29:00 PM
A fine narrative
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