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In the Cloudy Sky

In the Cloudy sky singing and dancing is on music with lightning

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:52:00 PM

love the last image...pd

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/29/2011 6:47:00 AM

It is a fine haiku,bl devnath.Thank you very much for your nice comments on my poems.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 9:44:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. please go ahead. waiting for you. bl

Kash Poet

Date: 12/29/2011 2:43:00 AM

Very nice haiku Devnath.Enjoyed this write.Thanks for your comment at my page.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 9:49:00 AM

My dear friend, you are very nice. Re-thanking you for return. bl

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/29/2011 12:27:00 AM

Very nice. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 9:52:00 AM

My lovely friend, your qualities are thanked along with you. You write in such a way that I am bound to comment. I am helpless there. Thanks for your comment again. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2011 6:51:00 PM

Very sweet, BL! love the last line.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 9:54:00 AM

Thanks for your sweet comment. bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2011 1:09:00 PM

Very expressive work about nature..I could just see the scene..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 9:56:00 AM

I thank you again for stopping by....., no words..for thanks. bl

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/28/2011 9:22:00 AM

Hey Bl....I like the rumblings within this haiku...it makes me want to grab an umbrella..16 weeks too early from where I am...enticing though. Very good haiku.

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 10:06:00 AM

After 16 weeks where you will be there, I will be more than many weeks after there, because we are in different areas on the same World. Thanks for your comment, loved it. bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2011 8:50:00 AM

enjoyed this bl. harry

Bl Devnath
Date: 12/29/2011 10:08:00 AM

My sweet friend, thanks God that you loved it. Thanks you too. bl