In the Clouds

Sea rides in the clouds rains itself on the land sweet; salt waits its flow back

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2014 5:32:00 PM

The concept you presented here is splendid!!! Love that first line.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 6:00:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

John Lawless

Date: 7/27/2014 9:49:00 AM

Well done Mohan, good luck

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 6:01:00 AM

Thanks John for your wishes.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2014 8:47:00 AM

Wonderful write Mohan! Good luck to u!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 6:01:00 AM

Thanks Upma. Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2014 8:26:00 AM

- Many "clouds" in haiku poems today ......... well done, Mohan! - Hope you will win with your wonderful suggestions - good luck :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/28/2014 6:01:00 AM

Thanks Anne.