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In the City

Market stall sellers, spewing out cheap tat, for bargain hunting peabrains parting with their cash; items disintegrating from one single use. City traders impress with tall tales of the day, lapping up each others crap enjoying it's scent and taste; not caring for the common man whose lives they have wrecked. Office workers looking grey, another mundane day. Sitting at their desks, day-dreaming of a different life while listening to bosses drivel on about deadlines. Shop workers getting by, mastering people skills, satisfying customers; some are born to please but for others it's just painful. Buskers playing tunes, some are good, some are not. They enjoy what they do, even to an audience unattentive to the soundtrack of their day. Beggars in doorways trying to prise money from our wallets but who are the genuine needy? Alcoholics, drug addicts or rich Romanian gangs who treat it as a living. Cyclists whizz past, jumping the red lights. An obstacle for pedestrians and motorists alike; two wheeled accidents waiting to happen. Motorists zoom past at speed with arrogance and aggression; the survivors way to driving through city streets. A combination with potential for fatal consequences. Some walk through the streets, head down, oblivious to all around, focusing on getting to their destination. Others soak it all in; buskers, coffee shops, the bustle of life. If you're in the city, enjoy the city, even with the smog. Life's too short to be annoyed with the things that irritate us. Embrace what's on offer but accept you'll be ripped off!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2014 7:47:00 AM
Very well expressed poem Rob. City life with all it stands for. Thank goodness I live out in the country:) // paul
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Rob Carter
Date: 4/5/2014 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Paul. Its not all bad, I like to escape to country as often as possible though. I live in the suburbs which are near to countryside so not too bad. Its getting that balance, I'm neither city lover nor hater. Rob
Date: 4/5/2014 7:03:00 AM
Rob, this reads like a 21st century 'Country Mouse - City Mouse". When can we expect the City Mouse rebuttal? All sadly true but some would place it in the "Hustle and Bustle of the City" column. Nicely written and engaging from the first line.
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Date: 4/5/2014 8:09:00 AM
Thanks John. My ideal is a balance of the best of both. Didn't think about country mouse city mouse when writing but you are right. Rob

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