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A Passanger flight

Taking a flight

Technology is man’s welcomed beautiful insanity developing discoveries to give a chilling effect to humanity. Communication, intelligence and travel; all in nature’s plan Sapiens creating a wider gap to habilis we always can. Existing in so much weight, yet escapes gravitation’s upset different variables, different mechanics and there won’t be an onset. Smooth running aided by a radio frequency to intervene, advancing upwards, pressure fills its major vein. Destination attempted in the absence of traffic and shadows speedily runs without legs on a spacey meadow. Sending a caution of seat belts, the warning was to me floating high above cardinal points covered by the sea. A travel disturbance like the jumping of a canyon noise of gravels or soft versions of a firing cannon. Sounds and gallops but with no need to halt protests from hanging elements like pillars of salt. Steadily in motion to enjoy heaven’s advert the beauty of Earth below, like sand they convert. Coming low to a touchdown, weightlessness jot and write now running like a magnified vehicle, to passengers’ delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 7:10:00 PM
This perspective is so unique and well versed, very impressive Funom. Consecutive readings makes it even more so. I am glad I came upon this. J.
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:25:00 PM
- This is awesome... - Thank you so much for this great share, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise
Date: 5/7/2016 7:26:00 PM
yes, Funon. Technology is such a wonder. VERY well crafted this is.
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Date: 5/9/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much. I really do appreciate your wonderful comment.

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