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In Solitude

Solitude is a state of mind Can be in company yet find Your alone In solitude you can walk the dales Within your mind the sunlight pales If your alone You throw bread at flying seagulls In solitude not so much fun When your alone A single breeze rustles the trees Making branches sway with ease So lonely alone I sit and paint my mind elsewhere Creating a painting without that flair No one to share, when alone In solitude my thoughts are deep In solitude I try to sleep Wishing you were here. J

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/9/2014 4:32:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your Hm Seren:-) Hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2014 6:26:00 PM
thanks Jan ....Seren
Date: 8/7/2014 6:16:00 AM
Nice expressions on solitude, Seren. Good luck in the contest
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2014 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Ram it got a HM ....Seren
Date: 8/7/2014 3:50:00 AM
all the different moods portrayed nicely
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2014 6:29:00 PM
I did try to do just that....Seren
Date: 8/7/2014 3:41:00 AM
Fabuolus write on solitude Seren - seven for Seren! This will place well in the contest! I love the first verse and can relate to it - you can walk into a crowded room but feel lonely and out of place. Hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2014 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Jan glad it came over as intended...Seren

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