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and in my dream, I left this realm and floated through a yellow portal door, a world of shimmering glow, fields of golden rod swaying under an amber sky ; fluttering yellow butterflies and pretty yellow bird melodies, and bumblebees buzzing, I dwelled in this spiritual world of yellow until the morning dawn called me away. _______________________ March 3, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/in my yellow dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-832-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Unitied Colours: Yellow, sponsor, Silent One, (Inspiration Image 2) Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:26:00 PM

Broken Wings, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 9:01:00 AM

Linda, thanks for the congrats, the awesome and the love ~

James Inman

Date: 3/9/2016 8:43:00 AM

Peaceful setting that could be expanded in to a beautiful tale.

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2016 9:49:00 PM

James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/6/2016 3:06:00 PM

A beautiful place to be, indeed.

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2016 6:52:00 PM

Duke, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful !

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 12:02:00 AM

Congratulations BW on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2016 12:08:00 AM

Hans, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/5/2016 9:11:00 PM

Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your win! Another finely colored poem--another enchanting world created! Cheers, Brian

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2016 11:55:00 PM

Brian, thanks for visiting my yellow poem with congrats and the compliment !

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/5/2016 1:00:00 AM

Many Congratulations on your WIN......

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2016 3:16:00 PM

Sathya, thanks so much for visiting with congratulations, appreciate !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 10:57:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL, Constance. And congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 10:59:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2016 9:40:00 PM

A very lovely entry and deserving win with this beauty Constance. Congratulations! #7

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 10:43:00 PM

Connie, thanks for visiting with the lovely, the beauty, congratulations and the 7 !!!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/4/2016 5:24:00 PM

And a beautiful dream it is. Congratulations on your win, BW. Just checking back in. Peace my dear:)

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 11:18:00 PM

Daniel, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/4/2016 5:05:00 PM

Such a lovely yellow dream this is!n Congrats on your win, BW :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 11:34:00 PM

Laura, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the congrats !

Lu Loo

Date: 3/4/2016 4:14:00 PM

Broken Wings, congrats on your placement, I knew it would place well. Thank you for your kindness on my poems, you are very sweet :)-luloo

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 11:35:00 PM

Laura, thanks so much for the congrats and the nice comment !

M Asim Nehal

Date: 3/4/2016 3:09:00 PM

Awesome poem...............

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 3:39:00 PM

Asim, thanks for visiting with the awesome !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2016 2:43:00 PM

Great work..I enjoyed reading your yellow entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 3:45:00 PM

Sara, thanks for your comment and congrats !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2016 2:36:00 PM

- Beautifully described in an yellow dream, B.W. - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 3:49:00 PM

Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem with the lovely and congratulations !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/4/2016 2:37:00 PM

.....and congratulations :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/4/2016 2:31:00 PM

Love your yellow dream, Broken Wings. I felt like I experienced it too with your lovely imagery. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 2:34:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the lovely comment, the congratulations and the hugs !!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/4/2016 2:17:00 PM

It's getting to be a habit congratulating you congratulations B/W

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 2:30:00 PM

Charlie, thanks so much for the congratulations, oh just keep them coming, please !

Lu Loo

Date: 3/4/2016 11:44:00 AM

Broken Wings, you always carry such a soft flow with words so emotional. Very beautiful and perfect for the contest..Well written -luloo *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:57:00 PM

Laura, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment and smiles !

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/3/2016 10:59:00 PM

Hey there's darkness in that lol...but I love it none the less...beautifully executed BW...might want to go and retire there...first I have to find some yellow clothing...:):):)^WW^

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:33:00 AM

WW, thanks for the beautiful and the comment, appreciate !

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/3/2016 9:29:00 PM

Beautifully written B/W. Best wishes...

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:37:00 AM

Charlie, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/3/2016 8:09:00 PM

An epic write in a few short, well written sentences, BW. Loved this :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2016 1:44:00 AM

Laura, thanks for visiting and the nice comment, appreciate !!!