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In My Shoes

Frozen memories Emptiness of past childhood I was a lefty... for Raul Moreno's Contest: "Still Life"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2010 12:58:00 PM
this was very different. I enjoyed it! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/19/2010 10:48:00 AM
The best of luck with this awesome presentation Iolanda. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:34:00 PM
Enjoyed this senryu, dear friend-Charma:)
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:16:00 PM
Chuckles! "I was a lefty" cracked me up. I am not looking at photo of the shoes, but I gather from this poem that the left shoe may be worn more heavily than the right. (If so, keen observation!)
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest I nice write
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