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In My Place

Riding on a wave of misery and pain- Is like trying to find sunshine in the rain. Falling from a monument dedicated to the dead- I feel like no one's heard anything I've said. Sorrow follows me, like some lost little dog- As I traverse through life, as in a thick fog. So if you see me, with no smile upon my sullen face- Remember, if not for good luck, you'd be in my place.

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Sheol,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 5:44:00 AM
    awww thasa nice poem, thanks for your kind coments on my poem new job, I pray that the Lord will bless you, and that your interviwers will see something that shines in you something that theyw ant like they did to me, ever give up, I worked with children for 9 years and got my job in a care home 5 weeks agao, my dream was to work with kids or elderly from the age of 15 and I am 46 and God gave me a job in a care home as a domestic assistant and its just been great so after all them years my dream came reality, and already they asking if I would like more hours, Amen God bless yopu and keep you, may be with you at yourinterview, he promises to work together for the good of those that Love him and maybe he is just waiting for something amazing for you like he did with me, he will provide for you dear greatly, Amen God bless

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 11:48:00 AM
    Sheol, good afternoon... my poet friend... how are you??? as for me I'm ok.... I'm like your poem above... riding on a GINAT wave of misery... every time i think someone broke a smile they disappoint me with pain... it follows me everywhere i go... the luck of unhappy stupid misery... I wish i was KATHY BATES... and break the legs of them who have left me behind... ((lol)) kidding... They are far from near me.. Well good luck to me in this year.. sorry about the wise crack...always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 4:17:00 PM
    I hope not your life but just about things that can happen in life ...Very creatively put together..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara