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In My Dreams

I find myself still there where yellow fireflies dance, and all those silver stars hold me in their trance. The lavender keeps it's bloom no matter what the season, and I am seated atop that hill with no rhyme or reason. The same lush green meadow I still come to this place, a silhouette is all I see, until the moonlight reveals your face. Your lips barely grace mine our arms embrace, but then, the morning sun rises up and I lose you again. Every day and every night my dream, it stays the same, and I will keep dreaming on until I know your name. April 16th, 2015 A sequel/echo to my poem titled "In Your Dreams"

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Date: 4/19/2016 12:01:00 PM
A heartfelt dream read from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/11/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thank you, BL. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, my friend.
Date: 6/17/2015 9:37:00 AM
Fantastic, I really enjoyed this dreamy piece!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/22/2015 11:56:00 PM
I am so glad you did, Rick. Thank you!
Date: 5/22/2015 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful pen Kelly!This is a very dreamy and romantic piece my dear friend.Very charming and sweet.A7!I truly Enjoyed it!Dreams of love are so beautiful,and you should never stop dreaming, and the best part of all is that dreams are always there in our hearts and minds just waiting ready for us to catch them any time of the day we want and make them completely ours:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/24/2015 1:00:00 AM
Thank you once again for your wonderful comments. I'm so inspired by them!... I am happy that you enjoyed my poem, Dorian! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs :)
Date: 5/14/2015 5:09:00 AM
Very beautifully put together, Kelly...Some truly superb lines!! My very best regards!! Your friend always, john. :-)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/17/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thank you, John. Your nice comments are very much appreciated, my friend :)
Date: 4/29/2015 9:49:00 AM
Mysterious, dreamy and romantic poem, Kelly. Some dreams are meant to come true, you know:) // Stopping by to visit friends....hope you're keeping well! Hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/2/2015 6:49:00 PM
I am learning that about dreams, Paul. Sometimes, I give up on dreams too quickly instead of letting them come true... Thank you for your lovely comments. It is good to see you, my friend. I am doing well and I hope you are, too :)
Date: 4/25/2015 1:40:00 PM
Kelly, such a dreamy, entrancing poem, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Burning . . .
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2015 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind visit, as well!
Date: 4/24/2015 2:06:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful write for the dream contest. I hope to see this one at the top of the pack.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Armand. I've read some amazing poems that were inspired by this contest. We'll have to wait and see what happens...
Date: 4/22/2015 4:43:00 PM
oh my, kelly.. the mystery and flow of this piece floors me.. adorable.. wow!.. huggs and thanks for appreciating my piece..
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/26/2015 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. That means a lot coming from someone whom I admire so much!
Date: 4/22/2015 10:46:00 AM
I like the very passionate feel to this one..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/26/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you for your nice visit, as well, Sara. It is always appreciated!
Date: 4/21/2015 10:08:00 PM
Dreamy, wish my dreams were as lovely. BG
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/23/2015 6:40:00 PM
I wish the sun wouldn't rise so early and interrupt the best part of my dream :) Thank you for your nice comments, Barbara!
Date: 4/21/2015 9:47:00 PM
Kelly, an enjoyable read,dreams can be so real a 7 :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/23/2015 6:26:00 PM
Yes they can be as vivid as reality and sometimes those lines blur... Thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Eve!
Date: 4/21/2015 6:58:00 PM
Kelly - what an intriguing poem! Very mysterious. Good work!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/23/2015 5:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wally. I really appreciate your kind comments!

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