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In My Dreams

~In My Dreams~ I can’t believe it look what I see! There you are looking at me. How did you know we just talked of you? A thousand miles from home, can this be true? To see you there is like the lottery win I never thought I’d see you again. The world is small and gets smaller each day What a fantastic thing has happened today. Your eyes are just as I knew and remembered You hair a little thinner that I think was intended. I never thought you would be so tanned Gosh how I have dreamed of holding you hand. How come you are here in my hiding place? No matter, I always wanted to look at your face. Come here; come hug me I just can’t believe So strong and warm for you I did grieve. You have never met your brother –in-law! I felt a bump on the head I was then on the floor. I cried as I realised it was not as it seemed For my little dead brother was just in my dream.
©20/09/2012 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 4:49:00 AM
    just strolling along in your immersible poetry, knowing i.m on safe ground here, enhanced with in your heartfelt poems...

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Poignant theme of dream. Dream sometimes bear sorrow and pain, you know well. One thing I loved and agreed with you that this world is small and get smaller each day. Thanks for reading my write and for comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Gosh Mandy, you tear a little part of me here, Who knew? Glad you surfaced him, love you sweets, keep writing, hugs vie

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:45:00 AM
    this is really very sad, the more one reads it... soup mail

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/20/2012 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it is sad really harry because it is true, his little life was taken when he was a baby he was next to me in age and I remember the the night it happened even though I was only thirteen months older than him, I often wonder what he would be doing now if he had not been left with a babysitter that night.
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:01:00 AM
    another lovely heartfelt poem, another i like very much.. soup mail.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:38:00 AM
    A unique write Mandy,and how strong the power of dreams really are.All though I got a sad feeling as I read it,its still such a pleasure to read.Hugs and Love to ya`,and have a great day Mandyxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/20/2012 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Arild and back at you, off to Spain in a fortnight to get some warmth , can't wait. xx