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In Memory of Muse

In vein attempt I have tried, through the dull sheen of a half dried tear, to place your memory back into this drawer, my dear, just beneath the letter I can not open; everlasting is the scent of your words. Fading now at the edges, yellow, but not yet brittle, memories, creased and crisp so close to the surface that I still hear each and every little fret of the sound of you, denying me my overwhelming urge for yet one more moment. You, invisible in migrant flight, driven by heir's unseen forces winging comes the dark wind, brought to the eye upon the cracking sway of a tree, upon a blade of grass twisting to free itself beneath the bending waist of a crocus, it's yellow petals held fast. I beg of you memory, my depth of torment to cease, singing to me no more, as I place you gently beneath the unopened letter in this drawer. *the curse of 'writer's block'... (April 7 2016)

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Date: 4/8/2016 7:40:00 PM
J- I noticed your comment in my comment box and it just brightened my day. Thank you so much! I just read In Memory of Muse and it was awesome! It made me tear up and thats a good sign of writing!!
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/8/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Dana...this piece came from a place I have come to believe you know well, as difficult as that may be at times. I have mine to, the tears, and they come at the most unforeseen times over the littlest of reminders. J.
Date: 4/8/2016 10:56:00 AM
Your muse appears very accommodating in this poem! Writer's block is common, although I will admit it's rarely happened to me, and when it has, it's been mercifully brief. Thank you for reading Bag Lady. It's based on a real woman in my small town. / M
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:46:00 PM
I had a feeling Bag Lady was from an experience you had in real life.., it was almost photographic in it's telling. Thank you for your visit. J.
Date: 4/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
what a seamless, delicate read... great flow and substance, J... huggs
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/7/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thank you for saying...your feedback is welcomed on this grey and chilly spring day. huggs back J.
Date: 4/7/2016 11:06:00 AM
This is so poetic and gives no hint of a broken muse. So many great lines and so rich in imagery...the migrant flight, the description of the letter...yellow but not yet brittle..well done
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/7/2016 3:55:00 PM
For days...nothing...then suddenly!! Thank you Tim, much appreciated. J.
Date: 4/7/2016 11:00:00 AM
Our muse can be elusive. A stubborn little creature that feels uncomfortable when it feels forced to create words of wisdom, laughter and whatnot. Make it take a walk with you while inhaling the fresh oxygen as if a pet dog----unleash it and let it run within an unrestricted dog park. Your poem is well written. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Believe me you are not alone. ~ Sonia
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/7/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, and I shall try your prescription for recovery!... J.

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