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In Her Tiny Hands

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In Her Tiny Hands

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                                             in her tiny hands
                                             she takes my chin and smiles — 
                                             two diapers







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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Rereading this beauty..and thinking of my baby girl..already one year old..and soon out of diapers..Its the only pooh I ever get to miss : ) Today she did her first long alone steps(about ten)..A lovely post..Maybe its time for you to write some great poetry as i might take my break or slow down a bit..Lovely post

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:48:00 PM
    I will experience that very soon. - Dio

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:44:00 PM
    soupmail. I'll be here next five minutes.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Reminds me of being a mom! :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Reminds me of being a mom! :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:35:00 AM
    very nice ;}

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:29:00 PM
    so full of memories this is, but are they mine or yours?

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:49:00 PM
    Adorable ..perfectly said

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:51:00 AM
    what a sweet write, Ruben - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:48:00 PM
    Ow sweet ...... Very sweet ........ It reminds me of your Cami..I love this senyu and its going to myfavs Mr Chaplin:)

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:53:00 AM
    Great stuff, Ruben! I was just holding my baby grand-daughter and I loved that sweet baby smell. She yanked on my mustache and then pinched my nose. Ow!...Babies are strong! This senryu captures it all in just three short lines - Tim

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:42:00 AM
    so long ago, I remember the two diaper days. Very endearing poem like those tiny hands. Thanks for the congrats. love, Kathy thanks for the cometn

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 12:12:00 AM
    "This is too cute, Ruben O love it!!!! Carma"s

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:12:00 PM
    omg! how perfectly sweet and awesome is this Ruben!

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:39:00 PM
    :-) LOL! Ah, yes, the innocent smile as a new diaper is "freshly loaded." Hmm, sounds like my morning. Love this, but then again, this is my life. Potty training is not going well .... "No thank you," my daughter says to the princess pink throne with the magic wand you get to use to 'flush' the thing. It's the Harley of potties, for heaven's sake! I may end up using it myself. Hugs, Cyndi.. thanks for all the comments, chum, on my po's. As Nancy would say, sure do Preeshate you.

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 10:16:00 AM
    A sensitive senryu, Ruben. A very calming piece, even with the stinky diapers. Where are your limericks? Ah, or are you entering older posts?

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 10:46:00 PM
    I love the image of the baby reaching for your chin, Ruben! Is it a child of yours? I must go see if you won first place in that one contest. I can't remember who I saw were the top winners, but I bet you were one of them.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 9:02:00 PM
    great work!! thanks for stopping by me nonsense....I have been trying to garden and paint....I have been dry of poetry lately.

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 7:17:00 PM
    Such a cute Senryu dear poet ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Ruben ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Ruben-Adorable write here! Very vivid and sweet. Thanks much for your fun comment :) Have a great evening.

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