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In Dreams Ii

As she fades a sparling tear floats, It glows magically as it exits her divine flesh. I leap and I meet her touch once again And together the whiteness consumes us, Free falling to nothingness. My mind awakens and eyes yellow descend Upon my weakened body, And Destiny lies strapped hovering behind The yellow eyed beast. To be continued……….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/3/2012 10:35:00 AM
Ronny, I just love the imagery in this write of yours.. I hope your weekend is a great one :) Wilma
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:40:00 PM
Wow, what imagery!! the yellow eyed beast!! I sure enjoyed this.... from the little devil!
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:45:00 AM
You have your own light, a cleanliness, so to speak, and nothing can really enetrate though seemingly it will, each day is given, and you are special with this purity you speak of~ enjoyable read. Cindy Thanks for the com to bring me to this... :)
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Date: 5/29/2012 4:32:00 PM
the tenderness of your words builds up a sentimental flow.. and that final line speaks so much!.. well done, ronny.. wow!..:) huggs
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