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In Control of Time

Since the dawn of time every second has continued on not for one moment has it stopped nothing but God can have it sawn But what’s time got on you? is it in control? Or do you control? looking at your watch on your hand really have you got a life goal? Go out tomorrow don’t look on wrist live timelessly looking further ahead who needs time when life’s free! but is your freedom being fed? So time can have you on it’s hold but remember it need not be so relax lie loose to time demands make it a friend and not a foe!

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Date: 6/24/2016 5:51:00 AM
The last stanza is a message in poetry ... nice ...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/24/2016 6:06:00 AM
thanks Probir!

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