In Bloom

IN BLOOM some flowers bloom within days of planting others not for years—or with stunted timing only God ordains the beauty of His creations manifested in different ways and formations early ‘bloomers’ will habitually frustrate us discouraged- Gods plans remain anonymous we grow impatient with the changing seasons deliberating His timing to reveal His reasons ignoring valuable lessons of diverse planets flora some seem to flourish, while others become poorer several live decades, sadly a few for mere minutes does God have his hand on us all without any limits? assuming, concluding-- all reasons for His delay possibly-- perhaps sin may be leading few astray persistent, crafting global testimony to His glory by no means leaving late bloomers out of His story

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/29/2013 8:05:00 AM

This write is unique and creative. Every line from beginning to end keeps the reader enticed and makes them think, Nice job

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2013 6:36:00 AM

This is so good, with the master Gardener we can bloom at any age. I love this metophor. Hugs Rick. I'm off to your next one the title intrigues me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2013 5:47:00 AM

Very subtle way to tell the story of God's redeeming love..Great testimony of His faith..God is so merciful to give us chance after chance to mature and become the person that he wants us to be..I am glad that I chose this one this morning ....Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2013 4:41:00 AM

- Flowers are like people ...... everyone is different .... - A beautiful poem as always from your pen. - Have a beautiful weekend Kim, take care of all the "flowers" small and large. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/11/2013 8:21:00 AM

You had my brain going a mile a minute here. Plant the seeds, water them slowly, give them light, let them grow...they will overcome any trials. Much to ponder here. Wonderful job, Kim!