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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world there would be no war no disease and no pain in a perfect world there would be nothing that would make us feel like the worlds gone insane in a perfect world we would be free in a perfect world for you and me there is no perfect world since the fall of man a lesson we have all learned but everything will be perfect when Jesus has returned on his arrival things will be as they should be in a perfect place with him both you and me

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Date: 2/28/2017 1:00:00 PM
My dear Diane, in a perfect world, I'll be 6 foot 2, with 30 pounds less weight and 30 less years..... In a perfect world there will be no pain, no medication and only MORE LOVE....
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful pen Diane! Yes, in a perfect world that waits in the wings till Jesus returns.Beautifully painted piece:))A 7!Thank you so much for your very kind visit and comments on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) D
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Diane Christian
Date: 2/19/2016 11:06:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/18/2016 11:22:00 AM
nice one Diane, enjoyed it!
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Diane Christian
Date: 2/19/2016 11:06:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/16/2016 2:52:00 PM
Very nice!!!
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Diane Christian
Date: 2/16/2016 3:13:00 PM
thank you
Date: 2/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
absolutely what our Lord wants earth to be.. really divine, diane.. huggs
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Diane Christian
Date: 2/16/2016 1:38:00 PM
thank you nette

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