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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world I see people flying like butterflies As the mirror breaks they begin to die. Yet they are born again as robots(beep beep) controlled in a hive. Man has not yet begun to weep, he can not see his defeat. For he does not know the sly and very discreet. There is a hope but most don't want to believe. So unfortunately for them, this land they can not leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 2:34:00 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Maris. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 12:08:00 PM
interesting thought captivated in a sense the notion of being stuck in a repeated pattern
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