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in a hotel room

In a hotel room I lie on my side
watching him scramble to find his tie

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:42:00 PM
    Sure get's the mind spinning don't it. :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Iess is more, very nice

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 11:57:00 PM
    Great bit of fun. Nice.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:34:00 PM
    When do I get to read something new from you? I hope it's soon...I wanted to stop by and say thanks for the placement in your last contest. I'm honored to be on your list. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:20:00 PM
    powerful write, Susan : )

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:55:00 AM
    SuZ - hot mama. love the tie routine. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 11:07:00 PM
    This leaves much to the imagination. I love it! I have always told you that you are one of my favorite poets. My time away has not changed that. I'm so happy to be back reading your poetry tonight. Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:45:00 AM
    There is a lot to imagine between the lines of this clever poem! Oh, and thanks a bunch for my placement in the grief contest..... I wrote two different poems....couldn't decide which ones you might I'm pleased I entered the right one!! lol !

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 8:42:00 AM
    HI, susan. I never saw this one yet and I like it. It makes me want to know the story behind it. I came here to find out for sure if the cherry blossom contest had been yours, and I discovered that it was. I am so thankful to you for giving that contest. You are the BEST. Luv, Andrea (And thanks, you guys here, for the congratulations!)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Soup mail!!!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:13:00 PM
    very clever indeed - so much said there. Thanks very much,Susan - loved your regret contest

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:53:00 PM
    wow, so much is conjured up by this short little poem. nice one!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:48:00 AM
    Yes...........this tells, without telling!! It is all we need to know !! Well done !! (and ps.......I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem I entered for your loneilness contest.......thank you so much !! I was hoping to write something different for a change......I'm so glad you liked it......Thank you very much, Susan!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Very few words conveying a lot, Susan