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In A Hotel Room

First time to travel in a far away land,
Too excited to explore white sands,
My friend and I check in a hotel,
Economy room, price I can’t tell.

Overlooking a great beach to hail,
At a balcony I can feel a cool air,
With a simple hotel room we stayed,
I enjoyed the ambiance as what they said.

One king sized bed with two white pillows,
Bed sheets too white to crumpled with,
New experience but there’s more to follow,
In our hotel room it’s more than I expected.

One television, one painting, and one refrigerator,
The food is excellent you might want to order more,
Three days and two nights staying in the hotel room,
Leaving it too soon my heart is in so much gloom.

February 7, 2013

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:47:00 AM
    very nicely done Maria ;}

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Hi, my dear friend Maria! I'm so glad to read tonight another new beautiful poem of yours! The hotel you've described here is indeed a perfect place to relax and enjoy! I've just arrived from 3days Eng. Camp and you know what? We're accommodated in a nice room in the hotel resort almost like what you've described here but 2 beds. Our only problem with my Russian roommate and colleague was the absence of 3 holed sucket to plug our laptop :)). Well, Good luck in the contest! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 9:22:00 AM
    nice vacation and nice poem,,

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 7:41:00 PM
    Hi Maria, a very lovely poem... sad you had to leave in gloom.... i think I lived in hotels like 13 years ago... glad them days are over...xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Clean bed and good food on the table ..... just relax! - Lovely, Maria. - Hope you are doing fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)