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In a Faded Photo: sitting delicately on that cushion couch brothers snuggled at either shoulder jealously contending for her affection little sister happily squirming on daddy’s lap dreamlike calm: stone fireplace crackling, popping spitting sparks everything in place all as it should be as it should have been so long ago... knock knock on the door don’t answer, daddy warns it’s her again, daddy warns you’ll be sorry, daddy warns little sister squirming little sister sweating pathologic curiosity: irresistible impulse to answer the door... something out there who are you I ask it’s me son. told you not to answer daddy says told you it was her daddy says they cut off her breast she turned yellow it spread to her liver she's dead. little sister squirming little sister screaming in a faded photo...

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Date: 10/13/2015 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Tim!
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:01:00 PM
congrats
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Date: 10/8/2015 11:58:00 PM
nice win. PD
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Date: 8/26/2015 2:31:00 PM
Something evil lurks ........don't answer the door !! Wow.......you have me trembling !!
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Date: 8/25/2015 7:49:00 PM
I'm perplexed like Rosie but totally unsure I want to know more VERY scary! Light & Love
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:55:00 AM
Wow!!! What an intriguing verse here, Tim! Its got a rather ominous touch to it though, though it could also be quite lighthearted as I had first thought.. not sure if I have got it myself. hmmm.... Always, Laura
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:47:00 PM
hey did you ever soup mail me on this one? I don't think so! then again, my memory is for crap! yes, my first five years , the FORMATIVE years , were in WA. hate that state. I have a few vivid memories of its gloom and rain. A pretty state it is though. Let me see if I can find a poem of yours that is new for me.
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Date: 8/20/2015 4:02:00 PM
Tim, I really like this one, but I am not 100% I got it. Soupmail!!
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Date: 8/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
Ohh this gave me the chills...nice...
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