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Strong desire
Pupil gazing 

Inspired by the light my fire contest!

Copyright © Laura Mckenzie

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  1. Date: 3/4/2010 12:19:00 PM
    For sure Laura ..for sure.. your words are pure romance... thankxxx for all your special comments on my poetry reads today.. glad u enjoy my writings..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 6:41:00 PM
    awesome write! niece loves it! :)!!!!!

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 1:57:00 PM
    ~ Smile, alright, the answer to question A: "Jim Morrison, 'The Lizard King!!!'" ~ Smile, but I bet "Your Beauty" already knew that right!!? ~ And, I love "Your" write here; a lot that can be interpreted, within seven little words...."A Wonderful Write Dear Laura, Wrapped In, 'Impulses'"....Again, As Always, "My Love & Warmth, Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Loves,' Until, 'We Break On Through To The Other Side,' John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Day, Beautiful Laura!!!":):) "Bye" ~

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 1:45:00 PM
    ~ "Tone - Unites - Strong desire - Pupil gazing - Stir." ~ "Girl you know I'd be a liar, if I were to say to you now, girl we couldn't get much higher, come on baby light my fire, try to set the night on fire...." ~ Smile, now who does that remind "You" of, "Lovely Laura Mckenzie!!?" ~ Smile, now, "You" only get one guess!? ~ This write here sounds like, two souls, slowly melding, together...."How Beautiful A Thought!!!":):) ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 9:40:00 PM
    this is nice. check otu some of my poems

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 3:37:00 PM
    Great write and thank you for commenting on my work also.

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 6:20:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 2:59:00 PM
    This certainly does not sound like it needs any gasoline. Wow! It already blazing it seems. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 2:57:00 PM
    Lovely Lanterne Laura>>James

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 8:30:00 AM
    Laura, I enjoyed reading your amazing Lanterne.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 8:12:00 AM
    Interesting perspective... Laura. "Pupil gazing/ Stir"..."Impulses" Brilliant work, good luck in the Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 7:20:00 AM
    A wonderful entry to Brian's contest, Laura!! Nicely written!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 6:12:00 AM
    Thanks for supporting my contes Laura.Rgds Brian I belive MP was the inspiration for this design.

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 9:49:00 PM
    am not really familiar with this form of poetry but i got to say this, this one stirred something in me that had lain dormant for sometime :-p Good one Laura! John E

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 8:18:00 PM
    Very nice lanterne, Laura. Welcome back! We missed you! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 6:11:00 PM
    I love this piece....all five lines marry so well wishes.

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 5:59:00 PM
    this is a really intense! cool thinker of a great lanterne! Laura! good luck in the contest! and keep writin' all the great poems that you do for us!!! love, jim