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Below is the poem entitled Impatient which was written by poet Kieran Pavlick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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“Write me a Poem,” she said.
"Paint a Picture for me with words."
"I want to see, hear and smell what you write"
"You can choose the subject".
"But don’t make it sad."
“Write me a Poem,” she said.
"Don’t make it too long."
"Nor like a song."
“I want to be awake at its end.”
“I have a Cat.”
“Can you write about that?”
“On second thought, I’ll do it myself.” 

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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 9:18:00 PM
    Kieran,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
    LOL such a cute ending! Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love