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Below is the poem entitled Immutable which was written by poet L'nass Shango. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I think about you
Who could not think about me
What are you doing?

Did find that nice guy
The one with the car and cash
To father a lie?

Did the old one leave
Afraid of your bark and bite
And tears in his heart?

You knew if you called
I would beg your forgiveness
And make you more right.

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:59:00 PM
    It's nice to see you posting, L'nass! How are you? Great sequence; I love the ending senryu. Ruben.

    Shango Avatar L'nass Shango
    Date: 9/5/2012 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My good friend and fellow warrior of the pen, I give thanks to be alive and for your greetings. The word cannot be invisible amidst the throes of suffering. Pain is an artist's fuel