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A globule of liquid is
dropped into this ocean,
Blending in, one with the water that is
chaotic, frothy, never still.
Moving along,  flowing along the waves
Shaken, being the shakee, watching the water move
Everything after all is a tumble of roiling emotions

Then the ocean stood still,
and there was only hmmm . . .

It turns out, this globule was a mistake...
It never belonged, never truly blended in.
An illusion, perhaps?
It had always been different.
In a word:
In every sense of the word.
Easily separated, filtered out.
Then tossed, swallowed
 by sand.
Vestiges of it erased,
like it never deserved to be there in the first place.


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  1. Date: 1/3/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Nikko This brings me to sad places. Exquisite. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:58:00 AM
    Like the ocean, nikko, this is very deep, and i mean in thought provoking deepness, ... this is so wonderful...

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Nikko , I can see how the reader will put their take on this wonderful poem , I read it over a few times and could come up with a different view each time. Love It !!! Anne

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 2:16:00 PM
    just stopping to say HI.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:37:00 PM
    That is the way it is for some things just don't mix..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
    A true delight nikko, I had to read it twice a very intriging write.*smiles*Ron

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:29:00 PM
    I have been missing you and your adorable poems.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:14:00 AM
    Missy I can definitely indentify with this gem of yours. It is weird how we sometimes get into a space where you once felt so comfortable and all of a sudden you feel out of place.. okay that is just my take on this gem of yours.. Glad to see you on the soup :) *mwahugs* enjoy what is left of your Tuesday!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:50:00 PM
    what an unusual and enjoyable poem this is, Nikko. What inspired you to write of it? Is it metaphorical? I can see how it could be something much deeper for you. Thanks so much for your support today in replying to my poems and blog comment. Always the true friend that I miss here at soup. I see ARild and others are very pleased you are here too!! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Nikko!!!! how lovely it is to see you here:-) A very interesting poem you have here my dear friend.Hope you`re well and having a peaceful weekend!Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Ah Nikko The Sweet. You have penned perfection. So nice to see you here. Hugs all day for you!! Luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Had I been able to write with huge letters, I'd just written: BRAVO! Cozy and read something from you again Nikko. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:45:00 AM
    hmmm... much like myself. I like this one Nikko! It is good to see something from you this morning. I hope you are healthy and happy. I've missed you. hugs, catie :)