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I’m sending you a rainbow to brighten up your day I’m sending you a rainbow to chase the blues away I’m sending you a rainbow to make your world a happier place I’m sending you a rainbow to bring a smile back to your face Written especially for Nayda Ivette Negron 27th April 2016

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Date: 5/5/2016 5:50:00 PM
Short and VERY sweet! I love the couplet style and the repetitions a lot. Well done Jan!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:53:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Keith I do appreciate your suppor. My simple poem was written from the heart for Nayda who was having a tough time :-( I smile every time someone comments it is an uplifting write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/1/2016 11:27:00 AM
and you succeeded, I am brightened! :)
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Date: 5/2/2016 4:55:00 PM
aww glad you like it my friend I think it is an uplifting poem - rainbows always make me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 1:49:00 PM
very well written Jan :-)
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Date: 4/29/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 12:14:00 PM
That delighted me so much that I decided to pretend it is for me! Very cute and uplifting, like an unexpected greeting card that elevates your mood ... CayCay
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Date: 4/29/2016 4:21:00 PM
I smile every time I get a comment on this poem Caycay - I do find my simple poem uplifting and of course you can share it - in fact lets make it a poem for us all on soup to share:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/28/2016 11:43:00 AM
A thoughtful gesture Jan and a lovely poem...hugs
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Joseph I always smile when I get a comment and see the uplifting images:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 3:23:00 PM
Awwwwww....this is just so....uplifting, Jan. Bless you for your kindness. I enjoyed this read. Hugs
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Date: 4/27/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Eileen - I smile every time someone comments - it is a very simple but effective poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 12:36:00 PM
Nice to have a rainbow after weathering a storm Jan.
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:40:00 PM
Definitely Tim I love that comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 12:01:00 PM
- Colors make us happy ..... and provide delicious smile - Lovely poem to a friend, dear Jan :) - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Sun - you can share this poem too - we need more sunshine and rainbows in soup and in our lives:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 11:35:00 AM
A rainbow is a smile from God, just to remind us of better things ahead. Sweet thoughts, sweet Jan...
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:39:00 AM
I agree with you Charlie I know when I see a rainbow it always makes me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 11:05:00 AM
how nice of you jan :-) Im sure it did the job stephen x
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:11:00 AM
I hope it did Stephen I had a lovely mail from Nayda and she is reading all the comments:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 10:19:00 AM
How sweet this is Jan.
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Charma I think it is an uplifting write - sure makes me smile when I get a comment on the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 9:14:00 AM
Ah rainbows...the palette's of Heaven...beautifully done Jan...a great gift for Nayda...god bless you both...^WW^
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Date: 4/27/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so much ^WW^ I just hope it lifts Nayda's spirits - sure makes me smile every time I get a comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 6:42:00 AM
How lovely and thoughtful of you, Jan! I am sure this will put a smile on her face:) Hugs ..... paul
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Date: 4/27/2016 7:47:00 AM
I hope so Paul I know shes having a tough time at the moment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 6:23:00 AM
I'm sending you a smile because you're such a sweetheart.
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Date: 4/27/2016 7:46:00 AM
aww Thanks Lin I think its quite an uplifting poem :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 5:43:00 AM
Sweet and lovely, don't know how anyone could read this without smiling.
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Date: 4/27/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thanks James - it took 2 minutes to write - i know Nayda is struggling at the moment and i hope it cheers her up - i always smile when I see a rainbow I guess the sunshine that follows the rain lifts your spirits:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 4:44:00 AM
I hope it cheers her up, I'm sure it will, it sure brought a smile to my face.
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Date: 4/27/2016 5:14:00 AM
Thanks Mark I don't know what is is about rainbows but they always make me smile - I once saw them described as an upside down smile from God - I think that is a beautiful way to describe them:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/27/2016 4:43:00 AM
Even if it is written for her dear, Jan, I love it too! Haha! Hugs
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Date: 4/27/2016 5:13:00 AM
It's a 'feel good poem Demetrios - i know Nayda is having some problems at the moment and I sent it to her yesterday:-) I love rainbows they always make me smile - ye had April showers yesterday - one was a massive hailstorm but I saw 3 wonderful rainbows in an hour :-) hugs jan xx

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