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I'M a Puzzle

I'm a puzzle Confused and scattered You are a part of me How many pieces do you hold? You have my heart That's the biggest part Slowly I'm being put together Becoming the best of myself. You also hold my happiness All the smiles you put on my face Now I can love and laugh Knowing it's you who has me Two of the biggest parts put in place But I am a puzzle I have many pieces Emotions Trust Motivation I know you have those My emotions are all wrapped up in you Trust is just something you have because I know you'll never hurt me My motivation is you I work harder Try harder Do better Because I know I'm worth it I want to be as motivated as you Because you see the good in me You'll always have my friendship I would never want to lose you I hope you don't lose that piece Six pieces you hold The most important parts of me I am a puzzle You hold my pieces You hold me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 4:33:00 PM
I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Stacey. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2009 10:09:00 AM
so nice to have someone you can trust with your inner being!
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:29:00 AM
How wonderful that you were able to find someone who motivates you to see the goodness in yourself, Stacey. True love does build confidence and motivate us to "Try harder" to be the best we can. Your puzzle pieces seem safe in the hands of the one you describe and I hope he proves worthy of your trust. Very nice introspective write! Love, Carolyn
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