Illusion

Oh my lover, where art thee... This morning you felt separate from me... I miss your sweet love taste... Come back to me post haste... Just as the great life begins... You decided to leave once again... Why would you treat me this way... Keeping your love far away... I don't think I can live this today... Once this is done I'm on my way... Excuse me; you have been here all along... How did I create such a wrong... Thank you for the love bestowed to me... It’s only my Insanity...

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Elaine George

Date: 4/8/2011 4:30:00 AM

Many congrat's on your HM. Darren. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 4/7/2011 9:05:00 AM

Congratulations Darren on your honored success. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Darren. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/6/2011 10:08:00 AM

interesting twist, congrats on your win in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2011 8:34:00 AM

Cool twist in this poem, Darren. She was there all along. Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Darren

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2011 5:09:00 AM

Congrats Darren on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this marvelous write and remarkable entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor with luv ...

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/6/2011 5:07:00 AM

That last line just hit me hard. Very nice flow here.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/7/2011 10:00:00 PM

I like the old engilsh touches here in there, enjoyed reading your poem, it's true we don't realize certain thing till they-re gone and wnat them back, or because of noticing we miss.