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I'Ll Be Guilty

I know not much detail,this place of which i desire.To sin so sweetly,shall i find one to conspire? Hand in hand setting plan to visit the land of ecstasy.To take from it a pinch of pleasure to share between him and me.Reaching a climax that has the world itself stopping to witness our moment in time.The moon admiring such a resplendent crime.These such memories shall be eternal,recorded in the depths of my hearts journal.For there i...somewhere in the pages thereof.Preserved a place to write into memory the first time of which he and I make love.

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Date: 12/15/2009 10:59:00 AM
beautiful i love this truly <33 xoxox Rainbow
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:22:00 PM
very nice..a good work..the format detracts from it. I believe it does rhyme and could better be appreciated in grouped lines. I know not much detail,this place of desire. To sin so sweetly,shall i find one to conspire? couplets? Light & Love
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:51:00 PM
Amazing! So passionate, you had my heart racing! Great write!
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:29:00 PM
Oh my god I loved this.... " these such memories shall be eternal, recorded in the depths of my hearts journal" I love this line. Your lucky to have such good memories of this.... It beautiful
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Date: 6/21/2009 2:34:00 AM
My Hearts Journal?Making Love in Heaven?The Sin So Sweet?--Thats all i've got:p
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Date: 6/20/2009 9:28:00 PM
To love, and to be loved, I can only think of Happiness......always, Christy
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Date: 6/20/2009 8:41:00 PM
Oh this is a nice poem to conmemorate a memorable moment; a title? well, that's up to you jojojo I though about the word Eros for a moment, yet this goes beyond that; I always though that a relationship in love is a way of art, and making love is like canvassing such art =D thanks for sharing yei!!!
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