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Ike the Terrible

Ike The Terrible Ike; You had gone to many places and than you came to Texas. You were not invited, but you decided to come anyway. A lot of people left before that terrible day. A lot of us had no choice, but to stay. Like a thief in the night you arrived, on that 13th of September of 2008. We didn't sleep that night - everybody was worried. You came in with force and fury. Soon the lights went out, by morning you had already done your damage. Millions of people were left without power. For some people it was eight days, for others it was more, still others didn't have power for weeks. But Ike - you didn't care. You came here to destroy. Many people were without food, ice, or milk for their babies. Others lost all they had. In the daytime, when the rains finally stopped, we could see in our areas the destruction you had left behind, but that was nothing compared to what you did in Galveston and other towns. What we saw on TV was devastating. Many lives were lost. Ike - time has passed and now you are only a bitter memory. We learned something in these DISASTERS. God can give us plenty, but he can also take it away. You left us with deep scars, but from this - we will recover. We are now more united and closer to God.
By Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: I wrote this in 2008 when it happened. It was the first and only Hurricane That I have ever witnessed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/5/2014 9:45:00 PM
We moan in England if we get a heavy breeze . I only know of one hurricane in my whole life It dislodged one tile on my roof . Great write and even better read Lucilla.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/5/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thank you Darren; This kind of things we never forget. I shall visit you later.
Date: 5/29/2014 11:01:00 PM
Nice emotional poem my lovely friend. Memory is still alive. Such time is very difficult to pass on in that situation. Though God saves us always. Loved always, bl
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/5/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Bi. for this nice comment.
Date: 5/29/2014 11:21:00 AM
We love the sunshine and the soft breezes, mountains and moon light, and we must learn to love the storm too. I admire how your art gives honest yet lamenting respect to the wrath of the hurricane Lucilla. Your skill and heart have allowed me to empathize with the victims of the great storm. So nic to have you visit me again. J.A.B.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 6/5/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Justin for your wonderful comment. I will visit you again.
Date: 5/29/2014 7:01:00 AM
I can only imagine what that must have been like. Reading your poem makes it easier to do.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/29/2014 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for reading Richard. We just had another bad storm that left a lot of flooding, but not by my house We are still getting rain until Sunday.
Date: 5/29/2014 5:16:00 AM
a very frightening experience Lucilla wonderfully expressed and written worldly goods can be replace but life can not be hugs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/29/2014 8:18:00 AM
Thank you shadow, It was a real experience.
Date: 5/28/2014 5:10:00 PM
This piece was wonderful, I really enjoyed reading
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/28/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Cathy, I try to write poems when things like this happen....
Date: 5/27/2014 11:56:00 PM
gosh, I am glad you recorded it as a poem because those who read your work will remember this occurred. These things are horrific but they bind people together. well done, sweet lady. glad you lived through it.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, this is a hurricane that I will never forget. We were lucky we were only without power for 8 days. Where we live everything is electric.
Date: 5/27/2014 10:24:00 AM
i just wrote of a natural disaster, lucy.. this is such a riveting piece; beautiful!.. keep your chin up!.. huggs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/27/2014 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Nette for reading. We are now having a lot of rain and more coming.
Date: 5/27/2014 9:52:00 AM
I can so easily identify with this as I too have lived through many hurricanes and experienced the devastation left in their wake. Thank you for sharing this excellently written piece!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/27/2014 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading, it is terrible that this things have to happen. yesterday we had a storm and a Tornado close by. We were lucky that we only got the rain.
Date: 5/27/2014 6:56:00 AM
Sometime mother nature can be violent. Excellent write and well expressed. Tfs
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/27/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Ravi.
Date: 5/27/2014 4:41:00 AM
- Strong forces of nature - destroying much in just minutes - scary and sad - As always a very well written poem from you my dear friend Lucilla. - Hope your day will be fine :) - Wishing you all the best! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/27/2014 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise'
Date: 5/26/2014 7:10:00 AM
New Orleans will never be the same after a hurricane named Katrina pummeled through the city. Good write Lucilla.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/27/2014 7:37:00 AM
That is true and after Katina, we had Rita here' Thanks for reading.
Date: 5/25/2014 11:11:00 PM
There was a terrible storm called Sandy in New York a while back and the city is still recovering. This poem about a natural disaster hits home! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/25/2014 11:58:00 PM
Hi Matthew; I remember Sandy. We saw everything on TV. It always takes a long time for things to get back to normal. Thanks for reading.
Date: 5/25/2014 8:16:00 PM
Lovely write about all the destruction of Hurricane Ike...Mother nature can be very ruthless...hugs Tim
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 5/25/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thank you Tim, this disasters take a lot out of people.

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