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Ignored Breath

Sweet breath of steaming treats traveled through the diner, the streets, lingered and was ignored by all but one. A lone little girl with dirt upon her nose. Savory juices ran down laughing chins, dripping with the ending rains. Her trembling fingers flicking little dots of mold. Standing beneath wondrous sights, dancing stars, and the full moon's light, the poor girl ate. Tricked by whispering breath she smiled. Every swallow savored she stepped into the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/24/2014 3:27:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christina:) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/22/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thank you both, Skat and Linda. I appreciate your kind words. I am so glad I found this site. Everyone seems so nice already. I hope to share another poem with you soon. ~Christina
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:16:00 PM
wow, amazing imagery Christina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/22/2014 2:19:00 PM
Christina, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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