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If You Come To Me

IF YOU COME TO Me I will leave behind all the worldly care if you come to me ... I will open the secret door to heaven where you can quench your thirst. if you come to me.... I will remove all the veils for your desires to get salvation . if you come to me .... I will imprint my love on your walls and risk the worst prison ! if you come to me... I will commit the heinous crime to spend a night with you only if you come to me...

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/26/2017 12:32:00 PM

this poem is sincere; well done -JT

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/29/2016 11:45:00 AM

beautifully painted piece red

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:21:00 AM

Very passionate write on forbidden Love, let's hope it doesn't remain unrequieted!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2016 2:22:00 AM

Very seductive and teasing! ok You got me. I'm a fan, where do I sign up? Peace young lady:)

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/4/2016 8:41:00 PM

Hi Fiery, Wow, wonderful cadence and rhythm, very soulful and skillfully written--excellent piece! Cheers, Brian

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/1/2016 1:27:00 AM

Very sensual write. Beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:45:00 PM

thank you !

Paul Callus

Date: 2/29/2016 10:57:00 AM

You tempt with sensually suggestive words; the condition you lay down might be taken up by many:) ~ Regards // paul

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:01:00 PM

Thank you Paul ! I will be back with more of this kind...:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/27/2016 7:14:00 PM

Worth a second read. Still hot.

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:02:00 PM

Richard, I am so elated to see your comments...as always ...I will be posting something new( very soon !)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2016 11:56:00 AM

ohh, such sweet temptation; how inviting, red... good job!..huggs

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:03:00 PM

Thank you my dear! You are very kind...I love poems too...:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/26/2016 9:14:00 AM

This is sexy and hot!

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:03:00 PM

wait for more....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 11:27:00 AM

Hello Red F., WOW, that's one way to reel in a passionate moment. I see this is your skill to write in and with passion. I like this verse giving it a 7. Always nice to hear from you. LINDA

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:05:00 PM

Dear Linda, you have been really kind to me...:)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2016 8:58:00 AM

Back with passion in every line, Red. Your writing is beautiful...as are you. :)

Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:06:00 PM

Thank you my dearest !