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Join 'Em and Lick 'Em

Filled with lightning, night is the time for thunder. Marvel not how deafening peals can kindle bigger brother's' mocking the bogeyman’s sounds, "You better watch out!" Screaming youngsters flee to their parents' bedroom giving witty parents a chance to join in shouting loud above all the racket, "Ice cream! Who wants some ice cream?" August 27, 2013 Sponsor William Kekaula Contest Name Your Best Sapphic Stanza

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Rob Carmack

Date: 9/26/2021 5:32:00 PM

I remember you from when I first joined and it's good to see you're still around. Congrats and I enjoyed the read.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2021 7:43:00 AM

wow, I remember you also. Glad for the commendation from you. I don't write as much as I'd like to anymore. Maybe some day??

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/22/2021 12:31:00 AM

Reason, a witty piece that is very entertaining, wondrously conceived. Admirable indeed my friend, with my compliments, Aloha!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/2/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, William, appreciate the comment and the award. May your next write be your best one yet.

Robin Davis

Date: 9/20/2013 12:28:00 PM

very creative and humorous. entertaining and fun. nice job

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 9/21/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thanks, robin. I deal with the big bro syndrome as I watch my two grandsons interact (ages 15 and 7). As the youngest said last week - I wish he was afraid of me.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 9/5/2013 9:00:00 AM

This made me chuckle; I love a poem that makes me laugh. Cool piece (no pun intended lol); liked it very much! :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 9/21/2021 1:16:00 PM

I welcome COOL any day—thanks for commenting.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2013 9:11:00 AM

Nice expressions with inner feelings, I am impressed by the Sapphic stanza

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 9/21/2021 1:17:00 PM

It’s a great form for witty retorts. Thanks Dr.Ram.