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If Visions Mattered

I  set sight on visions Picture little if visions Matter ,i paint a photo To vision my pictures My vision has lost it way to my tongue I speak what I see,visualise or better yet picture My vision set scenes like am Picasso As I speak out my words in a Pablo More or less a parable of my words painting A vision of Picasso ,a pain tainting Is it a beautiful vision that i now draw Sharp words sketching fine black &white Lines of how the vision begins Curves and edges on how I flip and toss these metaphors And I colour the corners of my visualised picture With idioms and shade it with similes As it is similar to the photo of my vision I speak fluently with coloured thoughts Penciled on my incomplete picture As I have my vision destroyed For I set sight on visions Picture little if visions Matter,as I have less of a picture More of a photo Photo my visions Picture my visions Spoke of my visions Frame my visions with Synonyms, antonyms Or shorten my picture with acronyms Then the picture becomes and is less of a vision The absence of words paints an empty picture Words as powerful , dreams as wonderful Actions performed, as visions are destroyed destructed and demolished Words conquer, visions follow I  set sight on visions Picture little if visions Matter, i paint a photo To vision my picture Without these words I can not paint my visions.

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Date: 6/8/2014 11:55:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Vuyolethu :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:02:00 AM
Vuyolethu , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/7/2014 1:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I bring a wish that you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:59:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup good write
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Date: 6/6/2014 12:28:00 PM
I like how you take us through the thoughts in your visions...Welcome Tim
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Date: 6/6/2014 7:47:00 AM
Vuyolethu,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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