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''If Only a Dream''

Only in loving arms of evil. Innocence could be taken by force. Please remember me. I am but a star in the sky. Believe me now. I could have never said goodbye. A mothers' love. Meant not be measured. Our hugs and kisses. They should have been treasured. What price should you pay? Mommy,you took me away. Sealed fate brought my life to its' end. Now you will suffer the same. With only yourself should you blame. For..Caylee A.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 2:52:00 PM

Very powerful emotions in this poem, Kacey. It is so sad this child had to pay the price for her mother's actions. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/11/2011 7:30:00 AM

This is such an unbelievable and fascinating case. Nice job. I thought at first you were speaking of abortion until I realized it was more than that. Nicely done. Love, Joyce

Kacey Greenlee
Date: 6/11/2011 3:38:00 PM

Well thanks Joyce.I just felt I had to write something about that case.It was very sad to hear what had really happened to that little girl.SINCERELY.....ME

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 8:54:00 PM

VEry sad. This was most interesting to read.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2011 10:20:00 AM

deep intense and dramatically penned Kacey.. inner emotions to a blank page so poignant.. touching ..enjoyed my friend..thankxx for all your warm and always welcome comments to me..