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White powder chaser Her eyes stare like a lost soul Statistic is she http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-5.php

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 3:04:00 PM

The poweder chasers are destroying their health and chances for happy lives. Very sad, but it's a widespread problem here in the states too, James. Powerful senryu! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/27/2010 6:00:00 AM

Great write James, this is sad but what's even worse is that this is happening almoste everywhere and everyday..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/26/2010 5:42:00 PM

sounds sad and such a waste.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2010 2:15:00 PM

So sad, but what a nicely written piece. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/26/2010 2:02:00 PM

Very visual James ..could feel the emotion in your lines luv.. enjoyed..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2010 12:26:00 PM

statistic, nice one with deep thoughts to it, enjoyed..P.D.