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If I'M Gone

If I erased myself would you still have faith in yourself? Did you do everything you could for me, could you believe. Did you trust? Did you give all your love to me, everything that happened was it worth it to sit and watch me bleed? Now on your knees, you beg you plead, praying to that higher power to bring me back. Maybe you should have thought about that. No 9 lives I'm not a cat. Nothing you do, say, or feel can bring me back. You didn't think about that. The trust we had washed way can't save this one for a rainy day. Heads spin hearts ache, you tried to get my soul to break. Once it did I went away never to come back, but you should have thought of that.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/27/2015 2:04:00 AM
Bennett, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:28:00 AM
Fine piece of writing. I could feel the pain behind.keep up the great work.
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Date: 5/25/2015 1:29:00 AM
Bennett, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:09:00 PM
Bennett,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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