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If I were an Elephant It would be a benefit I would be strong, and not afraid My weight, size and sway would make men run away If I were an Elephant So much knowledge I could hold in my head, “intelligent” I could travel and never lose my way I’d remember where to drink and forage and never stray If I were an Elephant I’d swing my trunk back and forth it is so flexible I could get your scent or touch you oh so delicately I could pick you up or almost anything Or break a peanut shell and not the seed Or reach and forage on the tallest limbs Trumpet greetings or warn my family Carry water or have fun spraying you If I were an Elephant My family would be close and never abandoned Always staying together walking side by side I would purr to articulate my feelings until time has done some deep healing If I could just be an Elephant I would be your friend forever 12/8/2016

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Date: 12/12/2016 2:46:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:07:00 AM
Very imaginative ... Nice ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:08:00 PM
thank you, Probir, Hugs Eve
Date: 12/10/2016 8:45:00 AM
Very lovely poem x
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy, Hugs Eve
Date: 12/9/2016 10:07:00 PM
Awesome, Eve! 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:09:00 PM
Thank you, Rick, so tickled you liked it .. I added to it Hugs Eve
Date: 12/9/2016 9:33:00 PM
I would swear I commented on this already. This is a wonderful personification, Mrs Eve. Good luck:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:10:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your compliment Hugs Eve

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