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If I Could Paint Your Picture

I tried to paint a picture, Dear, of you, But there was no right color that would do. There is no blue that ever could display The tranquilness with which you face each day. I think no shade of red I’ll ever find To match the utter passion of your mind. Among sweet sunny yellow’s many hues, I cannot find a one that I might use. No color in this world can paint you whole. And certainly I could not paint your soul. The soul of you, so beautiful to me, I know that it will shine eternally. From inside out, my darling, how you glow. Such happiness I’d never thought to know. But never could I paint that brilliant light. Nor can I paint your beauty in my sight. If I could be Van Gogh, I think I might Create a picture of a starry night. And I would put inside it me and you Enraptured ever in that sky’s dark blue. Written April 1, 2014

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Date: 5/3/2017 3:59:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea. congratulations on your placement. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/3/2017 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:46:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
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Date: 4/20/2016 7:09:00 AM
Hey Andrea, way to go - glad I got to see this one. Really like the use of the colors to correlate with the feelings.
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Date: 4/16/2016 3:17:00 PM
I remember loving this one Andrea. Congratulations on your number one spot my friend. #7 ; )
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Date: 4/15/2016 7:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Wonderful cadence, and brilliant metaphor of colors for personal traits. Congrats on your impressive win! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/15/2016 3:22:00 PM
Lovely win Andrea, congratulations...
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Date: 4/15/2016 1:29:00 PM
Love the use of color! Nice love poem. Congrats
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Date: 4/15/2016 1:03:00 PM
Very romantic Andrea and you were inspired by a lovely song:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2016 11:45:00 AM
superb as always congrats on your win stephen
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Date: 4/15/2016 8:47:00 AM
Andrea, this is outstanding, all I can say...thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:47:00 AM
Ah this is beautiful Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:09:00 AM
Well I love this. I'm thinking it is a winner ;)
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Date: 4/12/2014 3:22:00 PM
awww, sure winner here, my friend : )
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Date: 4/9/2014 7:34:00 AM
Now this is imaginative, creative and beautiful. I think it is a winner!
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Date: 4/8/2014 1:11:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Nice poem--great imagery. Nicely written--poignant, but not gushy. If by Bread? What a cool song. David Gates is awesome! Thanks for your heart-felt words, :) Mel
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:15:00 PM
AWESOME......SKAT
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Date: 4/6/2014 5:59:00 PM
Well done Andrea... Verlena
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Date: 4/6/2014 11:59:00 AM
I love the "artistic" twist and the way you formed this poem into a piece of beauty! Well done, Andrea.....congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/6/2014 11:07:00 AM
Andrea; Congrats. on your win. I don't know why, but with this poem you brought tears to my eyes. I think you painted it rather well, from the depth of your soul. Thanks for sharing such beautiful piece. ... Lucilla... Check your e-mal later
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:58:00 AM
Hi Andrea...just popping back again to congratulate you on your worthy win :) // paul
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Date: 4/6/2014 7:42:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your deserved win...love the last line...it's something about it that took me to another place. ..beautifully written! !!! :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 1:45:00 AM
A brilliant write! Big congrats on your accolade!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 11:42:00 PM
This is extremely amazing! Congratulations on your well-deserved great win my dearest friend Andrea . I like your poem so much! Thank u so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/5/2014 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, andrea
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