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If I Can Make You Feel

Although some are blessed with healing powers, I can only offer comfort to you. At your side I’ll be in your darkest hours when your greatest hopes and dreams go askew. Of monetary wealth I have little, just concern, uplifting words to impart. Feelings of trust are my best transmittal when you feel crushed and your world falls apart. For some it seems that friendship is fleeting, but a commitment is what I can make. As long as my true heart is beating, take my unwavering hand when you shake. If I can make you feel self assurance when others have abandoned you in plight, then count on me smiling -- a hope-filled glance -- a nonjudgmental friend who’ll not indict. *Entry for Brian's "6-16” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/2/2012 4:20:00 PM
This makes me feel good and now how are you doing Carolyn. Best wishes for 2012 my friend. love phyl
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Date: 12/10/2011 3:06:00 PM
This made me feel good...I know your there for me..BTW..I ate the crocks.. they were delicious...more later about what they did to my thighs thanks..BG Copngrats dear...BG
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:37:00 PM
Yes you are a true friend! I have unwraped the brown paper & my fancy tin is now under my wee tree ;)...must wait to taste! Light & Love
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:10:00 PM
A beautiful committment Carolyn... one I know could be counted on to carry unto completion, Congrats dear friend on your worthy placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/9/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 11:39:00 AM
A very nice write Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:33:00 PM
Your loving heart shines in all your verse Carolyn. You are a dear person we all treasure! Luv, Lizzy
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Date: 10/9/2011 8:45:00 AM
Yes, indeed, many of us here on Soup know you are a true friend. Lovely piece, love
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Date: 10/8/2011 7:39:00 PM
Beautifully crafted for the contest, Carolyn. best of luck. :-)
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Date: 10/8/2011 6:43:00 PM
Good topic on which to pen your entry..Being a true friend is not easy for it takes the ability to care and one's time..Reads like a winner...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:10:00 PM
I can see this is a worthy entry for the Contest, and it raises the point... what sort of life will we live without true feelings and commitment from people,, wishing you a top spot Carolyn..!
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:13:00 AM
Yes. That's all that's needed from friendship - a certain comforting, whether it be social or internal. Love, daver
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Date: 10/8/2011 9:42:00 AM
Hello Carolyn, If I Can Make You Feel is a very interesting one. I love the truth in expressing how we could be of help to our friends in seeming little ways. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:02:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful poem and this is what people really need, when support is a must. You know exactly what is needed, time, love and care. So good, one of my favourites. Lee
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:33:00 PM
So awesome, Carolyn! Well done, warm and uplifting. Love it. Glad to see you writing, and there is definitely a brighter light in your writing. Take care, my friend. Love, Caroline.
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:19:00 PM
great write.. loved it!! thanks for being my friend.. free spirit
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:36:00 PM
Maybe I am clueless...but it seems your poetry has taken a turn for a different vibe than before. I must admit, I liked your stuff before, but now it has a very nice sizzle to it...which makes it doubly interesting to me! Respect,
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Date: 10/7/2011 5:24:00 PM
beautiful words, such profoundness. soup mail. harry
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:22:00 PM
What a great friend you are indeed. :-)
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Date: 10/7/2011 3:36:00 PM
That is sometimes all one needs Carolyn.. Just knowing there is someone that cares.. Lovely write for the contest, love Wilma
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Date: 10/7/2011 3:35:00 PM
This is the true meaning of friendship that you described here in your poem! I really was pleased to see it go to fruition, a complete friendly comfort to whomever is in need! You did wonderfully on this write of yours Carolyn! Great job!!
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