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If I

If I count a star each time I think of you I paint a sky of wishes in midnight silver blue If I watch the orange sunset each time i yearn for you I reach beyond the horizon and find the heaven's hue If a pick a flower each time I dream of you my garden never blossoms throughout the whole year through

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  1. Date: 7/5/2014 6:11:00 PM
    Hi Charmaine, This is such a beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading this gem!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Pretty and sweet, and it has got a fairly good rhythm too. I don't see how you came up with this. Even though it is short, adding more would take away from the charm. What's it like in Malta? It looks rather small to me.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:47:00 AM
    wonderful! Simple and nice.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 5:09:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 9:22:00 AM
    Lovely to read and so dear to contemplate. I remember when these things were real to me.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:18:00 PM
    simply wonderful, mon petit (can I say that, or is it only for little boys? heehee)

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:55:00 PM
    The power and magic of love's ability to transform our lives shines in this lovely poem, Charma. Je suis malade, mon ami. It's getting worse now, but friends like you give me the will to keep fighting. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:49:00 AM
    aww..Charmaine,that is a beautiful write all the way through.Mediterranean must have a wonderful impact on the romantic you:-) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:46:00 AM
    tender, tender write, charmaine.. what a beauty; i am swooning now!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:07:00 AM
    Psss. Smile ˜ "Sweeet Dreams To You, 'Beautiful Charmaine.'" *

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:05:00 AM
    The emotions which we experience when we are falling in love are almost enough to set off fireworks. Love is a powerful emotion and one which most of us will luckily have the pleasure to experience at some point in our lives. Love knows no boundaries and it will infect anyone irregardless of one's race, stature, age or intelligence. Love is possibly one of the most powerful natural drugs available for us to experience. It is raw emotion at it's best and it is out there trying to find you.

    Date: 5/14/2012 1:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Smile ˜ Yessss, 'It Surely Is.'" *
  1. Date: 5/14/2012 12:50:00 AM
    Pss. Smile ˜ "Thank You Beautiful Charmaine, For Your Kind Thoughts In Re, 'Sleeping Beauty' * I Love Fairies Also, Especially Beautiful Tinkerbell * 'Sweeet Dreams Beautiful Cinderella * My Love Always,'" John!:) ˜

    Date: 5/14/2012 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 11:58:00 PM
    Ps. Smile ˜ Hello Again, My Dear Beautiful Charmaine * Twas Wishing To Reply In Re Your Beauties Kind Visit This Beautiful Gift Of A Day * Yesss, The Poe Posted Felt Familiar Unto Myself Yet The Date In This Little Book Had 4|7|12 Above The Rough Draft? Also, I Believe That I Shal Change Fairies Unto Sprites When Possible * Thank You, For Your Beauties Lovely Visit * My Love To You, Forever; John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Who's this guy? What makes him so special? : ) I love this poem, speaks to me. Beautiful! To my FAVs! Ruben.

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    Date: 5/11/2012 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Im glad you like my Bike! : )
  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:10:00 PM
    Beautifully written!!! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Always a page turner, your words I mean they make me want to turn a page and read more, luv vie

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Very light and beauty with your imagery usage. Very good pen you have there! :) God bless, Cindy

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:21:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Seems to me your garden is EVER blossoming! Love the vivid imagery. This is a beautiful and sweet poem! - Best to you, Karen

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Amazing Charma.Love it.Last stanza*If I pick a flower*