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Ideas Arrive

Chaos arrives on broken wings Imbued with ideas and passion. Order arrives on rails Complex in its simplicity. Anarchy is a stowaway Removing all systems, Those perfect or corrupt. System lends itself, Its power of structure, To accomplish Or to limit. Not all change is good, Not all change is bad, No system is perfect. There is No absolute perfection in order, No perfect chaos that can stand the test of time, No true anarchy that can last through the ages, No system that won’t collapse under stress. But we can last. No individual is perfect, No idea perfectly fitting Some need tweaked, Some need refitting. They say don’t fix what’s not broken, But what if what if it’s broken, And they just don’t know what to fix? Another viewpoint is needed, In matters important or nondescript, Or valiantly we must retrofit, Our way of thinking, our way of life, Or come crashing in a heap of What if? What if it had gone like this, And not like that, Which had crumbled down Into the ocean above and below What if? What if? What if people had worked together in the beginning, Not just one group of people, but all people, And agreed to endorse change. Don’t change what’s not broken, But what if it’s still being fixed?

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Date: 6/12/2016 11:12:00 PM
Taylor, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:30:00 PM
Taylor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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