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I'D Be

If she was a planet, I’d be the comet that keeps passing by… watch my fly If she were light, I’d be a shade producing object… basking If she was an ocean, 32 degrees Fahrenheit and rising would begin my journey towards her end... flow with me She’s the landscape, my mind can’t escape… paint it perfectly My contrast and comparison… debate but be on my team The relativity of my theory… go beyond what's seen and the cream in my cone that lips can condone… do what it do If she were whatever, I’d be the perfect opposite… we fit like that

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Date: 6/4/2014 1:00:00 PM
Love the rhythm to this piece of art of yours!!!
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:52:00 AM
Thank You

Book: Shattered Sighs