Ichtos

Within the lines of (reason) i see a deep despair its been driving for some time now, a fault and favor attitude; with neither good heed or care! condolances sketchy evidence and goodwill led so astray, surely oh so surely is there not another way? to fill the void...no chasm that we peep into and run...! lets get up and face the challenge, while there's still a race to run.!

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Glenn Sentes

Date: 7/10/2011 6:29:00 AM

deep...yet profoundly meaningful! Race your way to the top, pal! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 12:40:00 PM

ps enjoyed your oily cash comment. hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 12:39:00 PM

I like this one here. I wonder how I missed it before! Joe, what is the significance of this title? Probably some word I should know. haha. Luv, Andrea

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 1:44:00 PM

Happy New Year to you Mr Maverick. A clever write . Difficult for a novice as me to get into but there are voices within. Telling me that between times of outwardly normality, there are chasms of despair that one false step will drop you into. That we must walk that path and take chances risking all to gain all. Forgive the rambling . I found this a really intriguing piece. Peace and happiness tou you. Eamon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 6:11:00 PM

hummm! that is a challenge one would take to fill the void,,,, merry x- mass,, how are you,, have a nice one,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2010 1:41:00 PM

Interesting work in this one.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I hope that this Christmas Day held all your hopes and dreams in fulfilment..Sara