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Ice King

Ice King

The blade is frozen - feels like ice,
arcane the skies of winter's war,
'the Valkyries' bold entice
today to fight alongside Thor.

This great of days is best to die,
the snow, white shroud, persists around
to slowly muffle his war cry,
on skyward Kingdom he'll be crowned.

© G. V. 07-27-2013
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Uniquely creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Clever Giorgio and loved your note!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:25:00 PM
    good work...congrats to you. BG

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:59:00 PM
    it appears I was right, well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Hello G, another nice winning poem... you are amazing.. luv~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:06:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Giorgio! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Giorgio, an excellent winning poem! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure. you sure took this one to the nice cold ice... Congratulations :-) ~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:01:00 AM
    reads like a winner Giorgio love it Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:46:00 PM
    nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 9:20:00 AM
    Friends: Thanks to all of you! G.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 5:03:00 PM
    You are the King, hopefuly no frostbite on the tongue. Your style of writing is taylor made for this contest. Should I congratulate you in advance??

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Goirgio, your poem is just awesome, well done and I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Surprise Me Contest, I am very honoured. Constance

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Great write Giorgio, this one deserves to win...Peter

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Nice to be king...Good write

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 7/29/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Right on!...
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
    you king of myth, G... such fine images you conjure with a meter and substance that simply must be evening there; have great night!.... wonderful art-word.. thanks for including me in your contest list; so honored!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 7:35:00 AM
    I could not figure out if she wanted more from us haiku or epic, but for epic you have nailed this!! Great job in only ten lines or less, Giogio! I loved your note at the end. A real king may use the ice any way he wants. GREAT footnote.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:46:00 PM
    For me , this is really a perfect epic poem expressed tersely & very creatively through this very wonderful form my dear friend, Giorgio. Very impressive and You did it very well. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing & your precious time stopping by on my poem. Have a great weekend! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Iambic tetrameter has always been difficult for me! Well done, this is a great poem!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Love your 'ice king' poem. I can picture him through your words. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:13:00 AM
    What a wonderful take on the ice cube contest! Gives one a chill !! Ps.....thanks so much, Giorgio for the placement in your recent contest. You have showcased some amazing poems!