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I Wuv Wu Daddyyyy

Lying in the incubator amid her nursery ? Tiny eyes fixated upon the light as gazing Beyound this wall of glass; their little heart Swaying soft purity while they stare; lovely Such innocence entering into a brand new World and reaching these, precious hands Trembling with joy their Spirit recognizing Love's touch; in this, the apple of life's eyes Lifting them gently from birth's white pillow... Whispering as cradling Beauty's kiss; a breath.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2013 4:08:00 AM

Ahhh..how beautiful this is.Reminds me of the first time i gazed in my beautiful daughter's eyes..This goes to my favs

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/6/2013 5:40:00 PM

What a wonderful thing. Now the real work begins.

Johnny Rhinem
Date: 9/10/2013 12:43:00 AM

...................................."SMILE, 'YES' JOHN, NOW THE 'REAL' WORK BEGINS *

Cindy Lu

Date: 9/3/2013 8:35:00 PM

Very sweet verse. I enjoyed it so much this evening. Take care in my absense. Going on a vacation. Just will be submitting to Spectrum Publications. I have a few thousand regular readers that I can't let down, or I would've put my pen down a year or so ago. God Bless You John, Love, Lucinda

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/3/2013 3:52:00 PM

This is beautiful John..You described the feeling a newborn gives so beautifully..Going to my.favs!and tnks for reading my verse..john!Charma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 12:56:00 PM

Interesting John,,, life is precious... xox..Linda